søndag 29. november 2009

Det datt en linje ned i min hodet, også en til og en til..

I'm just the one you turn to when there's nobody else around
The one who's always there listening, comfort you as best as I can
Then you forget about me again, until next time you're all alone
But if you keep this up much longer there will be no next time at all

Treat others like you would like to be treated someone once said
I believe in that phrase, that's why I've stuck up with you all this time
But that saying should go for you as well and you treat me like shit
So if this goes on any longer then I'm through giving a shit about you

It will hurt in the beginning cos you were once a great friend.
But I'm hurting anyway so it won't make much difference
I wish things could be different, but that's totally up to you.
If you start treat me like a friend I will treat you as a friend too.

 og det var resultatet. et dikt? en sangtekst? 3 vers kanskje da må jeg ha no refrenger og no bridge og kanskje en m8.. hmm

Men kan noen si AKKURAT HVA DERE SYNES? Ikke no "ååå så braaa" hvis dere egentlig tenker "herregud lillebroren min på 3 år kan skrive bedre" thankyou! (:

2 kommentarer:

motionocean sa...

funker bra som dikt det der Linn!!

Skjønner teksten, den kan passe til mange personer nå til dags :/

Synes ikke det var dårlig i det hele tatt, du uttrykte det veldig bra i ord :)

McDork sa...

hehe takk (: